Peer+review+for+Johnny,+Winston,+Kevin+and+Michael

Well done, a strong science digital story. The deign and technical quality is good. The narration is clear but at the beginning was not in sync. The narration for the materials started before the hypothesis was complete. Next time you might like to add music. Check out how the Blue team incorporated this into their digital story. You used still frame transitions and video from other sources (nice introduction showing water sources) effectively to show the different parts of the process and enhance your communication. Your method was particularly well articulated as were your graphs. Be careful though that special effects don't detract from the science. Some things to consider for next time. 1. Try to offer a reason for your prediction. 2. Make sure you clearly identify the dependent, independent and controlled variables. 3. Take care that the correct scientific terms are used. You repeatedly referred to measuring the mass of chlorine (Cl2) but what you were actually trying to measure was the mass of lead chloride formed. 4. Ensure that the symbol for the unit of measurement for all quantities are included in the column headings of tables. E.g. (g) for mass. 5. Check to ensure that your still frames are in the correct order - graph 3 appeared before graph 1. 6. Remember to suggest a further question or idea for an investigation related to this topic. 7. Don't forget to credit the adults who helped you, like Mr May and Mr Utecht. //Ms Jordan//

Yo A block people!! Wow, I think that your experiment idea was pretty creative, and it was all displayed very well in the movie. All the scenes seemed quite informative and detailed, and each step was clearly shown in the digital story. Apart from the voice synching, another part of the movie you could change was the scene with putting the conductivity probe into the beaker and recording it, since it passed by sort of quickly and before I could digest the information it dissapeared. Nice job overall though group. -Shao-Yan

The waterfall in the very start of the video was a fresh idea ! Overall, this video was quite good, but the narration and the scenes of the experiment weren't matched with each other the whole time, so it was a bit hard to understand clearly, since i had to match the scene and narration by myself in head. Nevertheless, the organization of the scenes and their quality of information was good. Nice job ! - Cara Yun-