Peer+Review+for+Group+9

Bibliography written on the very bottom of the page was impressing since it was a new section that i had not thought of. Additionally, the pictures attached with the materials were helpful, because when reading the material lists, sometimes there are equipments that are not much familiar. Nevertheless, by replacing 'so' to 'therefore', the lab report might look more 'professional.' Also, the readers will understand easier if the method was more clear enough. -Cara-