Group+5+Peer+Review

Your research question is very detailed and you clearly stated the relationship between the independent variable and dependent variable. But the most outstanding in your report was your procedure-- with each step you used clear and concise scientific language such as starting from when the Zinc granules are submerged into the Copper Sulphate until the Zinc turns into Copper. This can be indicated by..." and you incorporated all the variables in the steps. Your research question was quite complicated but your method was such that it would be easy to investigate by another student.

Though your procedure is already long and detailed, your steps are sometimes quite hard to follow because of technical steps to follow, etc. A change you could make is to break them up into more steps to make it easier to follow in sequential order.

Good job! =]

Nina & Howard

Your lab report is very detailed, especially your method. Your method contains a lot of details, which allows the reader to really understand what you were doing during the experiment. The lab report is very well written, but it could have been an even better lab report if you guys were able to write conclusion and evaluation, too. -Min Soo