Peer+review+for+Jonathan,+Hoi+Chi,+Jacob+and+Bex

Well done, a very strong science digital story. The deign and technical quality is excellent. The narration is clear and I like how all of you spoke. You used still frames, music and special effects to effectively to show the different parts of the process and enhance your communication. Some things to consider for next time. 1. Write a chemical equation for your reaction using symbol formula and not just words. 3. Please follow the outline given for scientific tables. Tables, are called tables and need to have a concise and descriptive title at the top that relates the dependent and independent variables. Units of measurement need to be included in the column headings the raw data needs to reflect a consistent number of significant figures. 4. Your graph is numbered graph 2 but there is only one graph. Take care with proof reading. 5 .Next time remember to suggest a further question or idea for an investigation related to this topic. 6. Don't forget to credit the adults who helped you, like Mr May and Mr Utecht. //Ms Jordan//

Good narration and editing skills. It was easy to hear and understand. I liked the blue stuff and the song. It was a very clean and smooth experiment. //Fishsticks and Howard

Hey yo I liked your vedio. It's pretty creative and the music made people relax.The good narration made people understood the steps easily.And the blue product were so cool~! by the way Hoi Chi looked funny in the vedio.Anyway good job guys!!//