Group+2+Peer+Review

Group 2: Experimenting with LEAD IODIDE!
Dear Group 2, you wrote a very good lab report. I think that your graphs are done very well and the data recorded is presented in a very clear and easy to read fashion. I think that you should check through your report and remove pronouns such as we, our, and I. All the best! - Jessica Faline: It is really nice. Your graph and table are easy to understand. I think you should make your method clearer in order to let people understand it. For example, you should tell what kind of equipment should be used for the measuring of mass. Over all, i think it is really good and clearly explained.

Sam: You're lab report is really good. Everything is detailed and easy to understand. You could have added a little bit more detail for you methods, so it was a little bit easier to follow. I liked you're pictures, and I think that you're conclusion and evaluation was really good, and was easy to follow, and had everything in it that was suppose to be in it.

Vincent: Good job, your wikispace was very well constructed, everything is well organized and has no stray words or pictures. One small problem that was missed is the 1 in the graph. You should change it to 1.0 to have the same number of decimal places and significant numbers. Other than that there were no other errors, nice pictures, nice graph, nice table. 4.9/5, .1 off for the small problem.