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How does the amount of concentration of the reactants effect the amount of the solid and aqueous solution formed?
Karen: I think your lab report is very well written and detailed. I really like your procedure/ method because it's very easy to follow and clear. However, you've got some spelling mistakes and a few run-on sentences. It's only a few minor errors, but if you corrected it, it would look much more professional. You also kind of repeated yourself over and over again in the hypothesis/aim/conclusion/evaluation, which bored me really easily. Try using a hook or attention grabber so you'll get the readers interested. Other than that, well done.

Luis: I think that your lab is very well detailed. One small problem I found is that your method was a bit hard to follow. It was very long and had many steps. I don't think i could've easily followed those steps to redo this lab, it would be complicated. To have fixed this you could've instead of making it so long, you could've made it more compact. Have about 10 steps that repeat themselves a little, ex. Repeat steps one through four except this time with 9 part water and 1 part Sodium. Other than this small problem I think your lab is very well done.

Faline: Your lab report is really well done. It is very clear and specific. I like how you put the pictures beside your method to show how the products look like, but i think you should shorten your method. It is good to be specific, but if it is too specific, it makes people confuse. Over all, i think you have done a great job on this lab report. It is clear and colorful.

Madison: Your lab report is very neat and well written. I like how you used your pictures to make it easier to follow.Your method was hard to follow but in the end it go tyour point across. You also repeated your self many times during the hypothesis/aim/conclusion/evaluation. But after reading through it all, i would say you have done an exceptional job.

Emily- I think overall your lab report was really good, just careless mistakes. For example for the method trial 2 you skipped the number 12. I agree with Luis, Faline and Madison, your method was so long, it was hard to follow and gives the person trying to do this experiment headaches. Other than that everything else was good.

Kim: I think your lab report is very nice. Your pictures helped me identify what you have done and found in your experiment.However, I found that there is some difficulty to read over your method with a clear idea since the method was written too long. It was a little bit confusing for me to follow your method but your lab report is well written and detailed. On the whole, I suggest you to abridge your method in order to make other people get a clear idea of the method.

Ms Jordan: A strong piece of science writing. The solid formed when the two aqueous solutions are mixed is called a precipitate. Temperature is also an important controlled variable, because temperature affects the speed of a chemical reaction.